Would this be a good movie?
Posted on Mar 04, 2010 under heavy Equipment Trailers |It’s the 80’s. There are two abused kids (15 yrs old), and they run away. "They" don’t intend to. Sid has a bicycle trailer, and the other, his friend Tim, covers himself up with all the stuff while the first one is not there. The camera doesn’t show this, the audience doesn’t know. Sid rides the bike away, loaded with his stuff, and comments "Wow, this is heavier than normal."
He gets to his hideout, some little shanty out in the sticks, and he is sitting down, taking a rest, when he notices the bags move. He is wearing a machete on his hip, to cut brush with at the shanty, and he pulls it out and sneaks over to the trailer. He smacks the bags aside, and draws back, and Tim is there. So they have an argument, then Sid decides to let Tim stay. They end up traveling around the state, having various run-in’s with the law. It turns out only Tim has been reported, and Sid has not. The law is cracking down hard on Tim, and when they’re in the park, Sid is in the trees, but Tim is spotted by the cops. He rides away, and the camera shows a sign that says something about a cliff ahead. We hear a scream, then the camera fades.
It opens at a church, during his funeral. The preacher says something about the body not being found, and then the camera cuts to the hideout. Tim and Sid are there, and Sid is wondering how he did it. He tells how he jumped off his bike, threw some fake blood down the cliff, then ducked out of sight before the cops saw him (80’s were a pioneering time for DNA and stuff). The cops sent out a search party, but it came up empty, assuming the coyotes dragged the body off.
This is a VERY basic outline of it, but would it be a good movie? If there’s a movie maker out there interested in making it, I could send more info by email. I don’t have the funds or equipment to undertake such a task, so I can’t easily do it myself. I just ask to know the title of the film, and perhaps have it sent to me before it’s on the shelves?
I’m not a movie maker, sorry. I doubt any would be on here. Yeah it sounds like a good story and all. But you need an ending. Sort of. That could work, but it’s not really a real conclusion. And when thinking about this movie in more detail, make sure the tone of the movie stays the same and the targeted audience stays the same throughout the movie. But good work, it sounds interesting. If I read this plot about a movie coming out I would see it. Godspeed.
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By Jay on Mar 4, 2010 | Reply
I’m not a movie maker, sorry. I doubt any would be on here. Yeah it sounds like a good story and all. But you need an ending. Sort of. That could work, but it’s not really a real conclusion. And when thinking about this movie in more detail, make sure the tone of the movie stays the same and the targeted audience stays the same throughout the movie. But good work, it sounds interesting. If I read this plot about a movie coming out I would see it. Godspeed.
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